Said it before, keep an eye on the volume my dude. Think of the listener when you're making your tracks.

That being said, you're still getting better :)

Really nice to see you getting better! Great stuff! :)

Try keeping the sub bass going with the kicks, sidechain it. Helps it feel less empty.

Also, feels a bit repetitive. Try changing the synths more.

Hope this helps. Keep at it!

Yo, huge improvement my dude. Lovely seeing u improve over time. Keep it up :)